WRA-130 Ellie Jensen

I thought that the layout of this article was interesting in comparison to other pieces we've read in class. It seems that she's talking as though third person naritive for you to read as a situational experience. I felt that it was a well done attention getter. She is setting the text up for a reader to experence or have the ability to visualize what the author once experienced in her childhood. It has the ability to express some emotion when she continues to explain the difficulties that are in relation to being a woman novelist. personally, however, I found this piece a bit extensive and too discriptive. I found myself becoming unfocused frequently and found that she was building small tangents from her discription, personally I believe that this article could have been protrayed just as excellent cutting back a paragraph, simplification is sometimes the latter for well writen text.