WRA-130 Ellie Jensen

revision is re-seeing

have a relationship with drafts- work on problems and not fearing making changes

what is yor draft trying to do?

-readerbased prose

-writer based prose

is the question I'm asking clear and sufficently limited?

Have I answered "so what"

is there one most important thing I'm trying to say

purpose is clear and how well the information is organized around its purpose

re-researching

-find quick facts

local revision: revising for language

listening to the voice

aviod sound glib- don't draw attention away from the information in the paper 

tightening seams between what you say and what they say

scrutinizing paragraphs

scrutinizing sentences

editing for simplicity 

take out unneed or confusing words

be reader friendly

follow the instructed format this helps direct the reader a bit

looking closely

already manuscripted, pruning sentences  and tghtening things up

proofread

make sure all grammer is correct

aviod sexiest language